Kia ora Rusi, I think that you created a very eye catching and informative poster for your DLO. I like how you offered sentence starters for positive, helpful and thoughtful comments. What would improve your post is if you added some more writing explaining what your given task was and how you created this DLO or came up with your idea.
That would really take your blog post to the next level!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Rusi,
ReplyDeleteI think that you created a very eye catching and informative poster for your DLO. I like how you offered sentence starters for positive, helpful and thoughtful comments. What would improve your post is if you added some more writing explaining what your given task was and how you created this DLO or came up with your idea.
That would really take your blog post to the next level!
- Miss Birtch