We use it to add interest and intrigue
Adverb (comma) sentence
Quickly,curiously,importantly,Firstly,often,Remarkably,Similarly,Significantly,Surprisingly, Readingly,Happily,Sadly.
Example-Consequently-Surprisingly,everyone was at school on time
Surprisingly,i was at class on time
Firstly,i wake up in the morning
11.w-start word sentence
We use it to sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.
Who,While,When,Whilst,Where,What,Whereas
Example-While the teacher was talking,Alesha was watching YouTube.
While the coach was talking, Daniel was bouncing the ball.
While i was watching T.V,i fell asleep
W-sentence-when we thought we finished our work,surprisingly the teacher gave us more work
Adverb-Surprisingly,I finished the work on time
6.Preposition sentence
Example -In,Against,Before,Between,Over,Behind,Within,Under,Below,At,For,Throughout,Near,About,After.
Throughout the class,Daniel was sleeping.
4.Red,White and blue sentence
Use this when you need to give more than one idea on a topic.
Example-The essentials of rugby are kicking,passing and tackling.
Bullying is not OK because of conflict,fighting and arguments.
Basic Introduction
Q/R- Quote,
Rhetorical Question-A question you don't need to answer
TITTLE-THE MERCHANT OF VENICE
AUTHOR-WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE
KEY ARGUMENTS-USE WORDS FROM THE QUESTION>WHAT YOU ARE ARGUING A KEY MOMENT THAT SURPRISED ME WAS WHEN SHYLOCK DIDN'T GET HIS POUND OF FLESH.
Outline- THE 3 THINGS YOU ARE GOING TO WRITE ABOUT RED,WHITE AND BLUE.HE WAS WILLING TO DIE FOR MONEY TO GIVE BASSANIO. SHYLOCK AND ANTONIO HATE EACH OTHER.SHYLOCK DOESN'T SHOW MERCY.
"IF you wrong us,shall we not revenge?."(Shakespeare-Shylock)Have you ever felt like taking revenge?In William Shakespeare's The merchant of Venice a key moment that Shylock the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond.This moment was shocking ,outrageous and fascinating. This moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antonio didn't like each other but still agreed on the bond,Antonio was willing to risk his life for Bassanio,and Shylock did not show mercy in clamming his bond.
Basic Body paragraph x3
Point-The moment when Antonio agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antonio didn't get along.
Evidence-Antonio was a merchant and Shylock made a living lending people money with interest. While Shylock charged interest,Antonio lent money with interest and sconed Shylock for doing so.He also spat at Shylock and called him "cut throat dog".
Explain-Therefore the reader is shocked to discover Antonio and Shylock can come to an agreement about money lending,It is also shocking because when Shylock calls Antonio out for the way he treats him,Antonio tells Shylock that he will spit on him and call him a dog again This treatment is not usual between people who make agreements.
Link-With treatment like this from Antonio towards Shylock,and a promise to be just as cruel in the future,it is shocking that they both agreed to the bond.
mirror conclusion TAKO
outline- William Shakespeare The merchant of Venice a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to a bond of pound of flesh if he couldn't pay back Shylock .This was shocking because Antonio hated Shylock and promised to mistreat him in the future,Antonio was willing to die for bassanio even though he begged him not to take the risk. Finally ,because Shylock had never shown mercy and did not at the trial.For these reasons it is clear that this moment was shocking to the reader.
Evidence-
Explain-Because Bassanio is a very loyal and close friend to Antonio and that is why Antonio is willing to die for Bassanio.
